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FANTASY WRITING CONTEST #6

ENTRY #12

 

I Will Control You

I had just started my greatest dream. I won the lottery and was set for life. I could travel to all the places in the 
world I wanted to see. I could buy anything on impulse. I could look any way I wanted. I had my passport and my 
Concord flight to London England.

I had a couple of days free in New York city. I asked the limo driver if he knew any wild places. 

He asked how wild?

I said I was ready for anything. He drove me to a night club. I told him he was to wait for me. He said he would be 
at my beckoning. 

I spent most of the night dancing and drinking. When I walked out he was waiting and helped me into the limo. He 
asked if that was wild enough. I said if it was possible to get any wilder. Sam said he had another place in mind if 
I was game.

I said I was ready. 

Sam said it was special and he would pick me up at 6:00 p.m. I would need a new outfit. 

I protested.

He said to dress casual and I would understand when I got there.

I was out the door at exactly at six. He was already there.

Sam drove me to this fashion store. All the mannequins had on a shiny or polished look. I jumped out my shoes as one 
of the mannequins motioned for me to enter the store. They were all live mannequins. The salesman greeted me as I 
entered. He was a good looking in shape gent. He had on the same polished clothes.

He had on a white long sleeve close fit shirt, nice cuffed black pants. He wore a black vest over the shirt. His 
shoes were highly polished. Strange as this may sound his head was totally inclosed in the same shiny material. He 
had a slit opening for his mouth, small holes for his nose and larger cut out for his eyes.

He sensed my surprise. He told me he was dressed in rubber as were the mannequins. He noticed my hand rise and was 
trembling. He said I could touch it or him. 

I slowly and softly ran my fingers on his chest. I actually felt faint. He reached out and took hold of me and lifted 
me up. 

I wet my panties as he carried me to a chair. Even his hands had black rubber gloves on. Gently he lowered me into 
the over plush rubber appostered chair. It felt cold at first then it warmed up to my touch. I let my hands run down 
from his shoulder to his chest. When my fingers hit his belt, I jumped like electricity was going through me. I could 
see him smile through his mask. 

He pulled me up to him and asked if I would like to try on some rubber.

I could not answer him. I knew I was smiling from ear to ear. 

He whispered in my ear he would have some models display some of the styles. What was I interested in?

I still could not talk. I just nodded and sat back down.

He walked out and returned with another man in a dark blue rubber dress suit. He introduced him self as the owner 
Vincent. 

All of a sudden his eyes got stern and he snapped,"Where is her wine". 

At that the salesman dropped to his knees. He begged forgiveness. 

Vincent said that was one demerit. He turned around and apologized to me. He said his servant was still in training. 
The salesman returned got on his knees and lowered his head. Slowly he raised the glass of wine and offered it to me. 
I was told as punishment he would be my table for the rest of my visit. 

Vincent turned and motioned to a salesgirl to come over. She rushed over and fell to her knees and lowered her head 
to the floor, and spread her arms out. 

YES Sire Vincent.

What would I be interested in seeing. 

I was still a little over whelmed. I told her I would like to see dresses and blouses. 

She returned with several models all in rubber. Full dresses and skirts. A line dresses and skirts. Long and short 
sleeve blouses. Next was bras, panties, stocking, gloves. They even had figure enhancing corsets that was guaranteed 
to reduce my waist by 6 inches. 

All the time my salesman kept me refreshed with wine and hors d'oeuvre. He never looked at me again. He kept his 
hands above his head and took the glass when I was finished drinking. When the salesgirl told him something was 
empty. He immediately left and returned with something different.

After the dresses the models had on slacks and jeans. All different style blouses. A modeled came in, in a cat suit. 
She was totally inclosed. Her body was inclosed in a second skin. Her breasts were not restricted though. They stood 
out so nicely.

Impulsively I reached out and touched them. I jumped back when I realized what I did. The salesgirl told me not to be 
shy. I could touch anything or place I wanted to. She then slapped the models tit and cracked her ass. Then she 
turned to me and encouraged me to touch the model. I reached up and felt her breasts. Then I massaged them. I could 
feel her nipple get very hard. 

I asked what keeps them erected.

I was told the cat suit and any thing else I wanted to go braless in was reinforced to keep them outstanding.

The model had a helmet on, gloves and 5 inch heeled boots that ran up to her crotch. The crotch had a zipper to let 
you relieve yourself. She wore shorts to hide the zipper. The helmet had a long neck which was covered by the high 
neck on the cat suit. I was told I could wear a wig over the helmet or have my hair threaded out. 

I wanted it immediately. The salesgirl asked me to strip. Without thinking I did. As the salesgirl was taking the 
measurements. I realized I was still on the sales floor. The model was writing down the measurements. 

The salesgirl said that I was very close to what the models were and I had a choice. I could have custom made or 
select off the hangers. 

I said I wanted something immediately. I wanted to wear the cat suit. I also wanted to have a skirt and blouse to 
wear later.

The salesgirl excused herself to get Sire Vincent. At that the model went down on her knees and lowered her head and 
spread her hands on the floor.

Sire Vincent entered and said he understood I was interested in immediate sales. He apologized and said the clothes 
may not fit as he would like. They would fit nicely. 

I said I understood but I wanted to be in the cat suit immediately. I told him about my flight on the Concord to 
London England. I wanted something to take with me. 

He slowly looked down at me. He said I have a beautiful body and he would do me proud. He reached out and held my 
breasts. They will look excellent in a cat suit. 

He motioned to the salespeople to go get what I wanted. He then sat me down on the salesman. He lifted my leg and 
started to power it so carefully. Not one bit of power hit the floor. He did the other leg. He took my hand and 
lifted me up. He powered my hips then my crotch. He said I was very wet. He asked me if I wanted something inside me. 

I said with a start,"What"

Sire Vincent said he had all kind of fun things to fill my voids.

I said I never did that and was not ready for it.

Sire Vincent said I soon will.

The salesgirl returned with several rubber male members. The were all sizes and shapes. Sire Vincent describe them as 
dildos and butt plugs and gags. He even had some rubber nipple rings. 

I said people wear these. Sire Vincent pointed to a salesgirl and told her to come over. He instructed her to show me 
her plugs. She unzipped her crouch. She took my hand and rubbed her pussy. Inside was something hard. She told me to 
push up on it. As I did she gowned. She told me to push a little harder. When I did it started to buzz. Her eyes 
closed. Then she took my hand rubbed her ass hole. There was something hard in it. She again told me to push it. It 
also came alive and buzzed. She when asked me to zip her up. She then lifted my hand to her breasts. I started to 
massaged them. Her head went back. Her long hair flowed back. She asked if I felt anything. 

I felt something hard on each side of her nipples. She said her nipples were pierced and the post was holding on her 
slave rings. 

I looked at Sire Vincent. He said they all want to be his slaves. I should address them as slaves from now on.

The slave girl entered with my cat suit. Sire Vincent had my hole body powered by now. He sat me back down on the 
spaceman. Sire Vincent lifted my leg and slid it into the leg of the cat suit. He pointed to the slave girl to get my 
foot into the sock. When he got to my knee he lifted my other leg and slipped it into the other leg and the slave 
girl guided the other foot into the sock. Sire Vincent took both of my hands and helped me to stand. 

He looked down and said " You really like the rubber."

I looked down and the slaves back was all wet. 

Sire Vincent asked for a towel. He dried my thighs and pussy. He walked around and dried my ass. He rubbed power them 
all over again. He said I was all wet again. He told the slave girl to get a sanitarily napkin. Sire Vincent placed 
it against my wet pussy and pushed it in place. He then slipped the cat suit up to my crotch. He said he would take 
it out when I was completely dressed. He guided my hands in to the arms and told the slave girl to get my hands into 
the gloves.

Sire Vincent asked if I wanted a helmet on. I said no. I wanted the high boots on. The slave girl ran out and came 
back with a pair. She also had a pair of nylon stocking. She had me sit down again. Sire Vincent told me it is very 
hard to put rubber boots over rubber. The nylons helped a lot. The slave girl slipped the stocking on then the boots. 
She rolled the boots to my pussy.

They then produced some small belts. Sire Vincent explained that they kept my foot from slipping around in the boot. 
It was a harness that fit around the heel and fastener around my ankle and foot.

Sire Vincent asked if I wanted anything else. I told him I wanted the long hobble skirt, a A line skirt and matching 
blouses. I picked out a fashion dress a pair of jeans and shirt. 

Sire Vincent said they will get my order ready as he showed me to the mirror.

As I walked with Sire Vincent. Everyone applauded. I did not realize all these people were watching.

When we reached the mirror. The slave girl slowly opened the curtain. I collapsed at the sight of me in all tight 
black rubber. I was beautiful. I was the most sexy woman on earth. The tight rubber highlighted every curve. I could 
even see my bellybutton. The zipper hid my pussy. 

Sire Vincent reached down and unzipped my crotch and pulled out the napkin. When he zipped it up the zipper when in 
between my wet swollen lips. Now I could see them in the mirror. I turned around and the zipper was between my 
cheeks. They stood out round and firm. The high heel boots shaped my legs beautifully. The tops of the boots seemed 
to spread lips even more.

Sire Vincent asked where I was gong to show myself off. I said I just wanted to have my limo take me back to the 
hotel. I wanted to look at myself.

Sire Vincent said that would be ashamed. He would instruct the driver to take me to a party dance. 

I paid and the spaceman carried the packages to the trunk. 

When I walked out Sam the limo man, just whistled. He said I looked really beautiful.

He helped me into the back seat. That is when I realized how much wine I drank. Sam drove off he said that Sire 
Vincent gave him instructions for a party. 

I fell asleep as Sam drove. 

When I woke up it all black and quite. I got up on my hands and knees. When I tried to lift my head higher I bumped 
it against something. I tried to rase my hand to the sides and they both bumped something. I reached forward and it 
was open. I started to crawl forward. I crawled and crawled and crawled for hours. Could not find the other side. I 
turned around and crawled and crawled and crawled again. I could not find where I started. I could not see a thing. I 
realized with the heavy rubber cat suit on I could not feel a thing. I tried yelling but I did not even hear an echo. 
When I was totally exhausted. I laid down that is when a voice boomed"When Sire Vincent is happy I am happy." The 
happier I make Sire Vincent, the happier I will be." When ever I stopped crawling and attempted to rest the voice 
would repeat one phase or the other. It kept repeating the phrases until I said it. When the voice said one phase I 
said the other. Soon I kept saying both phases as I crawled to no where. 

The only change happened when I said I had to relieve my self. I was told to unzip my crotch and back up. When I did 
something sucked my pussy and ass hole until I finished relieving myself. Before I did anything I had to repeat both 
phases. When I got hungry. I had to say the phases and was told to move forward and suck. When I did there was hard 
and rubbery at my mouth. When I sucked hard something came out of the rubber tube for me to swallow. 

What seemed like forever I seen a light and the voice asked if I was ready to serve.

I said yes I was. The light went out and the voice stated "When Sire Vincent is happy I am happy." "The happier I 
make Sire Vincent the happier I will be." 

Now when I stop crawling. I would receive a hard slap on my ass. I crawled and crawled and kept repeating the two 
phases. 

After crawling forever again the voice asked if I am ready to serve. Without thinking I stated "When Sire Vincent is 
happy I am happy." "The happier I make Sire Vincent the happier I will be." With that a I seen the light again in 
what seemed as ages. My eyes hurt. 

When I crawled out I bumped into someone. Their stood Sire Vincent. He said make him happy. I immediately said,"When 
Sire Vincent is happy I was happy."

Sire Vincent said good slave girl. Sire Vincent told me to open his belt and carefully take his pants down. When I 
started to open his belt without stating the phase. He slapped my ass and pushed me back into the door.

He said leave me there until I learned. If I did not learn soon. My trainer will take lessons again. With that I was 
in the dark crawling again repeating both phrases. 

I could not figure this out. Why could I not find the end of this corridor. If I turned and started crawling I never 
touched another wall. Just the one by my left hand. When I was hungry, how did the rubber tube know where my mouth 
was. When I wanted to relieve myself it was always there to suck my piss and shit from me.

The voice started giving me instructions as I crawled. She told me I was to tell Sire Vincent how happy Sire Vincent 
made me. When he told me to do something. I would happily I was to do what ever Sire Vincent instructed me to do. 
When I did not repeat one of the phases after each instruction. I would receive a crack on my ass or tits or pussy. I 
think they new how much I liked to be spanked. I did not know that spanking my pussy would make me horny. I wanted 
one of those slave men to fill my pussy to the hilt. I wanted a dick to suck and feel his balls slapping my chin and 
neck. I wanted some hot cum pumped into me. Even my ass hole wanted something in it. This rubber cat suit made me 
feel like I was chumming every were. I felt like I was a dick in a condom. I never knew what horny was until I was 
incased in rubber.

All of a sudden the voice asked if I was ready to be a slave. I repeated which enthusiasm how happy I wanted to make 
Sire Vincent.

The light appeared again and the door opened. Outside Sire Vincent stood. I crawled out and kissed the floor and 
spread my arms. I lifted my head a quarter inch and told Sire Vincent how happy he made me. I told Sire Vincent happy 
I wanted to make him.

Sire Vincent instructed me to pull down his pants. I told Sire Vincent that I would make him happy doing it. I slowly 
ran my hands up him leg to his belt. I slowly unbuckled it. Then I started to unzip his pants. Sire Vincent told my 
to use my teeth. I trembled with excitement when my lips touch his pants. My lips could feel his dick push through 
him pants. I gasped and took hold of the zipper. I pulled out and down. His dick hit me in the eye. I kissed it. 

Sire Vincent slapped my face very hard. He knocked me to the floor. 

"I did not give you permission to kiss my manly hood."

I slipped my nose under his manly hood and continued to unzip his pants. His balls came out and I so much wanted to 
kiss and suck on them.

When I finished I bower down and kissed the floor wishing it was his manly hood. 

Sire Vincent said If I wanted to kiss something. I was to kiss his ass. I told Sire Vincent how happy I wanted to 
make him. I crawled around him and tenderly kissed those firm cheeks. His sweat moisten my face. I licked it off . 
Sire Vincent told me to french kiss his ass hole. When he bent down I immediately kissed his hole. Then I slipped my 
tongue inside. I slipped my tongue all around. I was surprised how much I enjoyed doing it. When I pulled my tongue 
out it tasted good. Sire Vincent said I did a good job and to come around in front. I did and as I looked up at Sire 
Vincent. He told me to open my mouth. When my jaw dropped. He started to pee in it. Sire Vincent told me not to miss 
a drop. It was like drinking hot coffee very fast. It seemed to burn all the way down.

When he finished he turned around and picked up something and returned to me. He handed it to me and said stick it 
into my pussy. Then he picked something else up and told me to stick it into my ass hole. Then he handed me something 
else and told me to stick it in my mouth. I did each of these with out inhabitation. I felt so proud of myself. I 
wanted to please Sire Vincent so much. Sire Vincent something bigger and flat. He told me to stick it over my head. 

I opened it and slipped my head into it. It fit so tight. It squeezed my jaw tightly around the gag. Sire Vincent 
zipped it shut. I could not breath. As I tried the gag went deeper into my throat. When I exhaled and tried to inhale 
the hood sealed itself even tighter. I started to panic. I could not inhale. The hood was sealing it self to my eyes, 
my nose, my cheeks were squeezing against my teeth. My whole head was being squeezed. I was gaging on the gag and 
growing faint. 

Why was Sire Vincent letting me die. How did I displease my master so much. Why was he suffocating me. I could not 
get the hood off of me. All of a sudden my arms were bound behind my back. I blacked out.

When I awoke I was shaking. I was so scared. How did I displease Sire Vincent. I want to know so I do not do it 
again. I felt cold air in my nose. I felt something in each nostril that let me breath.

I felt something holding my arms together from my finger to my shoulders. They were held so tightly and completely. 

I was turned around and placed on my knees. My head was pushed to the ground and fastened down. 

Sire Vincent voice came to me. You have a new slave instructor while old slave instructor is being retrained. Then a 
mans voice came to me. He said the next time I move around Sire Vincent or do anything I will bow and show my 
pleasure to him. I will never look up to Sire Vincent until instructed. With that I started to be beaten. Sometimes 
they were multi hits. Some were single hits. Other were hard and flat. My tits were responding with each hit. They 
bounced and jiggled. The got hotter with each hit. With each hit they wanted more. With each hit they got hotter like 
boiling milk. Every hit I got hornier. 

Then my slave trainer spanked my ass. Every so often he would hit my pussy. It was like a marvelous hard dick being 
shoved in me.

It would please me so much if it were Sire Vincent doing the spanking. I hope to never displease my Sire Vincent 
again. I wish to do his bidding for ever and ever

 Story Submitted By: Spike Jones

  Dark Side Creations